IM OBSESSED WITH THE MODELS AND THE WAY U PUT FILTERS ON IT FOR MOOD??? LIKE UGHHHH ITS SO GOOD, WHY AM I JUST NOW PLAYING THIS WTF. (BTW i saw ur post about the game on reddit! )
AHHHH JAYCE JAYCE I NEED TO HOLD HIM RNNN I KNOW HED GO CRAZY AND PROBABLY GET A NOSEBLEED OR SOMETHING (hot) BUT I JUST NEED TO COMFORT HIM WTF HES TWEAKINGGGGG AHHH
mc will take a bit getting used to LIKE THAT OTHER PERSON SAID! Cuz she seems like insecure and lowkey judgemental which i dont relate too, but WHATEVER. Since its a choice game i think it'll be fine since we can control how MC acts ! : D im super excited for this IM SO EXCITED! this is literally peak.
I LITERALLY JUST MADE AN ACCOUNT ON HERE JUST SO I CAN COMMENT- bro the demo had me audibly fuckcing giggling and just saying 'ahhhHHHH" cuz AHHHHHHH
(SPOILERS BELOW!)
JAYCE IS SO FUCKING CUTE AND I LOVE HOW HE WAS JUST SO SHELLSHOCKED WHEN HE FIRST SAW US SINCE THAT NIGHT CUZ OF OUR SMELL
JUST OMG IM FUCKING EATING THIS FUCKED UP SHIT SOO MUCHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW HE PUT THAT KNIFE IN MACS ASS AHHHH IT WAS SO HOT AND FUCKING DESERVED BRUH AHHH JEIHDEOHDOUSHEDOU he needa do more fr... bro jayce is so protective over us and u wrote his crazy soo well CUZ YANDERES ARENT ALL PERFECT LOVESICK BFS.. they are literally mentally ill and i think you really showed that well. like yes hes HOT BUT HE FUCKED UP. BUT WE LOVE HIM ANYWAYS YES. I WIILL BUY THIS GAME I DONT CARE ANYMORE I NEED MORE
and just when i htought it couldnt get better... 'no ai was used' UGHHHH THIS SHIT IS FUCKING PERFECT. FUCK AI. I LOVE THAT THIS IS ALL YOUR OWN WORDS, MODELS, BEAUTIFUL ART. FUCKING CINEMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omg I dont know where to begin. This is my first game I bought and it was worth it. The contrast between povs and storytelling was amazing. It was so fluent and I never got bored. Mc is not passive and in some scenes I even got shocked in a good way, she has her own character. I was scared by his pov at the beginning but he was so sweet to mc just like you described in profile. I loved every part of the game and the ART! It was gorgeous! You can see the vibe of the scene from art. The art in the beginning was very different and it captured disturbing themes perfectly. I have to say it was brilliant. I saw this game on reddit and I hope you continue to this game ❤️
First of all, congratulations on the work you've done, it must have been incredibly difficult to do all of this alone but you've done it so amazingly!!!
Everything about the game is amazing, from the design of the environments and the characters to the story and narrative. When I tell you that I'm obsessed, I mean I AM SO OBSESSED. I bought it and finished it the same day because I couldn't put it down. I'll probably play it again a few times until the rest of the parts come out, hehe. I can't wait to continue learning more about Jayce and how his story with the MC will develop. I really love Jayce and his personality, I like that he moves between a green flag and a red flag. I like my characters a little dark and violent but also with that touch of submission so Jayce is perfect for me.
Good luck with this game and I hope and wish that more people know about it so I can fangirl over the game with them hehe ♡
OH MY GOSH!!! I just want to say I've been following along about this game on Reddit (r/MaleYandere) and I was so so so excited to play this!! Already it's something unique and there are so many features about this game that make it beyond intriguing before even playing. Like the fact we control how much of a red flag he is? I love that for a yandere, so obsessed he even listens to what MC says lol
BUT THEN I PLAYED. OH MY GOD. First of all, I love that we spend so much time learning Jayce's psyche. We understand his character completely, why he loves MC, his motivations, everything. And Idk maybe it's the psychology lover in me but that was perfectionnnnn. I want more games to have prologues in the obsessive LI's POV.
I love the fact that when the MC and Jayce finally meet, we as the audience can tell exactly what's going on in baby boy's head lmao I felt so bad for him. I just KNEW he was screaming at himself internally the entire time like, "SAY SOMETHING! ANYTHING! PLEASE!"
(Also the beginning with the counting of the days was so cool!)
Everything is so beautifully written. Like actual novel level quality.
At first, I only played the demo. But it was so good and I did NOT feel ready to say goodbye to this game yet. I really don't even have 5$ to spend and I did anyways lmao But even just by the demo, it's so worth it to support this game.
And now I just feel genuinely sad I played through everything. God I love Jayce lmao I cannot wait to see more of him! Ngl MC is going to take some getting used to for me since her personality seems VERY different from mine lol But either way this is probably my favorite yandere dating sim I've played (and I've played like over 20 I think now). Like genuinely such a masterpiece so far!!
Random question-- if you were going to give a voiceclaim to Jayce, who would it be?
When it asks how much you want to donate, make sure you put 5$! The full game becomes available when you give the minimum for it basically, if that makes sense
Played the demo and instantly bought the game (what's here so far, I know it's not complete yet) because daaaaamn that was so good. The way the story unfolds is amazing and I'm really looking forward to more! I really enjoy your writing style; you are very talented. Keep up the good work!
Holy shit this game is nuts hahaha he's crazy. I've been following the development on reddit a little and I clicked so fast when I found out that this came out. Can't wait to see him get worse!
The BOI's POV was amaaazing! Got me entagled in the story real quick, I was feeling like I'm loosing my mind as well~ I've got a few questions if you don't mind me asking:
1)I wanted to ask you, what's the difference between demo and paid verison? Is that a complete game? Will you sell it only on itch or steam maybe?
2) Will be be able to influece MC's personality somehow or she is set in stone? Will there be options to choose if she's experienced or not like in 14DWY (if you know that novel)? It doesen't change the fact that I love your game reagrdless and I understand thatthis is your personal project and I'll buy it anyway but still curious~ SOrry for my rumbling
I paid for the full version and yeah, definetly get it lmao. It's not the full game yet, it's just Arc 1, Part 1, which is essentially the demo + WAYYYY more stuff (nsfw is more included too). I literally JUST finished playing the game lmao.
It ends with Jayce finding out about Blake and then, obv, we need to wait for the update (check out the "meet his enemies" to know more about the arcs). The arcs aren't out yet, but they will be soon hopefully!
And to answer your #2, I think there will be ways for MC's personality to be influenced by YOUR decisions. Like... in the demo (and full game), we can make decisions that influence our personality (like when we can choose to say its exciting or intimidating, etc). I'm not the creator though so I'm just spitballing lolll.
Okay yes! Thank you!! You actually got all of that right, I think! And thank you so so much!
Hopefully, I’ll be able to get these out to you all quickly!
For question 2, as of right now, unfortunately it’s hard to change the mcs personality, but with time, I’m working on making it so that you can (in the next parts!) Such as maybe more shy or more feisty!
To answer the question about experience, I can definitely try that! I know some people want virgin x virgin and I can def incorporate that! :3c
You're welcome, I wasn't trying to make definitive statements bc I have no idea where you're going to take it, but I wanted to reply to someone and help with the knowledge I had!
Can't wait for the updates and whatnot; you're doing great and I really love the game! <3
i played this last night in pitch black darkness and let me just say, the horror is real T^T okay maybe i'm a soft girlie, BUT I WAS GETTING SCARED DURING THE OPENING ARC LMFAO. the art is soooo good. he's so unsettling, it's fantastic. but also...do what you gotta do, hero :p it's only fair. the saucy scenes? gnawing the bars of the enclosure he has placed me in. i really like the mc's pov, as well. this is so fun. was scaraoused. looking forward to the rest of your game :D
(very yappy comment incoming) i enjoyed this sooooo much that i literally binged it and told my friend about it :3 the colors and general artwork are incredible and the contrast between mc and Jayce's inner dialogue is actually perfect (i love the different music choice to really drive home Jayce's crazy inner world, as well as the different palettes used for each of their perspective's). i really liked Jayce's battle with his guilt and "cheating" and loooove his character arc of building himself into a stronger, unrecognizable man. also the scene with Mac had me like 🥴🥴 in the BEST way LOL
my fav aspects are 1) the insecurity and confusion from the MC who doesn't believe a man like Jayce would ever pursue her (real af???) and 2) the emphasis on Jayce loving mc regardless of how she looks ;;; i love fanfiction, romance novels and otome games but the biggest struggle for me is feeling like even with the "perfect guy," i still wouldn't be his type or taste... you completely erased that feeling for me by making the mc's character model neutral and also having Jayce reiterate how obsessed he is despite any flaws. (edit: and i forgot to add this bit earlier but i really really like how mc is a normal, average girl and not some powerhouse with an ace always up her sleeve. i love that archetype too but your vision of mc is really refreshing.)
i could keep going but i'll be normal... i will be following this closely and genuinely cannot wait for the next update. thank you for your hard work ❤️🔥
LOVE this so damn much, and seeing what you're planning for the story on patreon!! Thanks for sharing this with us, so excited to see more!!! Frothing at the mouth for more Jayce fr
I just went through all the content and Jayce is a delight. He's so unintentionally funny at times, and let me say, I love that he's still a virgin (virgin ML for the win!).
His POV is the best part of the game, hands down, and I like it a LOT better than when we're in the MC's head. I like how unhinged he can be and his reunion with the MC was great! Right now he's the perfect mix between dangerous and a puppy in love. I was a bit more ambivalent about the Act 1 - Part 2.
The only thing I wish for, is that we'd influence the MC's personality a bit more through choices, I'm not clicking with her. But I understand that this is a passion project and you're the only person working on it. The MC isn't why we're here anyway, and Jayce as the product is great!!
I'll looking forward to the full game. It feels so special to see a VN for women with 3D models, I hope your game thrives and becomes a classic for yandere enjoyers!
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Edit: I wanted to gush more now that I've realized the rest of my comment gets hidden under a cut, so I can talk about some spoilers.
I really like how you established the source of Jayce's obsession. The intro was genuinely unnerving and as the reader, you feel scared, sad and then moved by him. One can understand how he ended up latching onto the MC. Him deciding to become a better version of himself felt strangely close to me, I got into working out because I wanted to be pretty for my husbandos when I was in highschool, lol.
And the scene where he got his vengeance against Mac, UFFF, I got chills!! Him pissing on that man was a hilarious choice, and tied everything up with a bow. My fav line there was Jayce saying he felt levelheaded, haha!
Other thing, I like how he's focused on marrying the MC. Like, yes, wife her up. He doesn't want to be a boyfriend, he's coming for the husband tittle.
And I love how his geeky personality peeks through.
Thanks so much for your review AHHHHH!!!! If I could have the entire game be Jayce’s POV, I would, but it would be really hard to do without expressing the MCS feelings etc! ):
Originally when I first started, the mc was going to be more like me, very shy and introverted, soft spoken and meek, but I realized in order to progress the story, there has to be tension, even having the mc do things I wouldn’t, like refusing Jayce! (I mean honestly, I’d be clawing at Jayce’s feet the moment he looks at me, like YES TAKE ME HOME I WILL NOT FIGHT YOU) But if that happened…there’d be no story.
This is why in every single part we will get a lengthy portion in Jayce’s POV! I know that’s what the people want! His view is ALWAYS fun and exciting! But I’ll try to add more options on switching up the mc in future parts! ❤️ I’ll try to add more shy options and choices, or possibly even MORE bold so that she can hopefully suit most people (Though I know I can’t please everyone!)
And I’m so glad you loved the game! And Jayceeee ahhhhh! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!
Yeah, I get what you mean, there has to be tension, and you have a vision for your game! Still, I'm super happy that you're thinking about giving us more choices, I'd like to have options to make her more shy. Or even dialogue options that don't go anywhere and say the same thing but in a different way, they're just there for flavor. Also, I hope that her sexual experience can be up to us as well, I want them to be Virgin x Virgin, that would be so cute!!!
Of course, that's all up to you as the creator, and I'll be happy to write a lengthy review for each update anyway!
Ooh I agree! I also enjoy the "just for flavor" choices. I know some players feel they don’t matter since they lead to the same outcome, but I find they make the experience so much more immersive. Especially with the MC being a gray base model with no defined features, it really feels like we're meant to self-insert or imagine our own OC. I’d also love if the MC sexual experience could be left open for us to decide too.
10s all across the board, can't wait for the full game !!! <3 can tell a lot of hard work was put into it, especially considering that it's all done by you ! seriously, congratulations on such a captivating/well done game !
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i miss him LOL looking forward to more of the story <33333
if i understand correctly, will paying 5 USD now grant access to the full game when it's done? what about if it increases in price due to the scale?
edit: lol sorry my comment is lowkey so cold. the demo was absolute cinema btw
THIS WAS SO FIREEE
IM OBSESSED WITH THE MODELS AND THE WAY U PUT FILTERS ON IT FOR MOOD??? LIKE UGHHHH ITS SO GOOD, WHY AM I JUST NOW PLAYING THIS WTF. (BTW i saw ur post about the game on reddit! )
AHHHH JAYCE JAYCE I NEED TO HOLD HIM RNNN I KNOW HED GO CRAZY AND PROBABLY GET A NOSEBLEED OR SOMETHING (hot) BUT I JUST NEED TO COMFORT HIM WTF HES TWEAKINGGGGG AHHH
mc will take a bit getting used to LIKE THAT OTHER PERSON SAID! Cuz she seems like insecure and lowkey judgemental which i dont relate too, but WHATEVER. Since its a choice game i think it'll be fine since we can control how MC acts ! : D im super excited for this IM SO EXCITED! this is literally peak.
I LITERALLY JUST MADE AN ACCOUNT ON HERE JUST SO I CAN COMMENT- bro the demo had me audibly fuckcing giggling and just saying 'ahhhHHHH" cuz AHHHHHHH
(SPOILERS BELOW!)
JAYCE IS SO FUCKING CUTE AND I LOVE HOW HE WAS JUST SO SHELLSHOCKED WHEN HE FIRST SAW US SINCE THAT NIGHT CUZ OF OUR SMELL
JUST OMG IM FUCKING EATING THIS FUCKED UP SHIT SOO MUCHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW HE PUT THAT KNIFE IN MACS ASS AHHHH IT WAS SO HOT AND FUCKING DESERVED BRUH AHHH JEIHDEOHDOUSHEDOU he needa do more fr... bro jayce is so protective over us and u wrote his crazy soo well CUZ YANDERES ARENT ALL PERFECT LOVESICK BFS.. they are literally mentally ill and i think you really showed that well. like yes hes HOT BUT HE FUCKED UP. BUT WE LOVE HIM ANYWAYS YES. I WIILL BUY THIS GAME I DONT CARE ANYMORE I NEED MORE
and just when i htought it couldnt get better... 'no ai was used' UGHHHH THIS SHIT IS FUCKING PERFECT. FUCK AI. I LOVE THAT THIS IS ALL YOUR OWN WORDS, MODELS, BEAUTIFUL ART. FUCKING CINEMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IF HIM AND Y/N DONT END UP TOGETHER IMA START A RIOT... I NEED TO CUDDLE AND HUG MY BROKEN BOY!!!!!
I can't stop thinking about Jayce after playing the demo, I love him so much! 😭 I look forward to future updates of this game with bated breath 😳💜
Omg I dont know where to begin. This is my first game I bought and it was worth it. The contrast between povs and storytelling was amazing. It was so fluent and I never got bored. Mc is not passive and in some scenes I even got shocked in a good way, she has her own character. I was scared by his pov at the beginning but he was so sweet to mc just like you described in profile. I loved every part of the game and the ART! It was gorgeous! You can see the vibe of the scene from art. The art in the beginning was very different and it captured disturbing themes perfectly. I have to say it was brilliant. I saw this game on reddit and I hope you continue to this game ❤️
First of all, congratulations on the work you've done, it must have been incredibly difficult to do all of this alone but you've done it so amazingly!!!
Everything about the game is amazing, from the design of the environments and the characters to the story and narrative. When I tell you that I'm obsessed, I mean I AM SO OBSESSED. I bought it and finished it the same day because I couldn't put it down. I'll probably play it again a few times until the rest of the parts come out, hehe. I can't wait to continue learning more about Jayce and how his story with the MC will develop. I really love Jayce and his personality, I like that he moves between a green flag and a red flag. I like my characters a little dark and violent but also with that touch of submission so Jayce is perfect for me.
Good luck with this game and I hope and wish that more people know about it so I can fangirl over the game with them hehe ♡
OH MY GOSH!!! I just want to say I've been following along about this game on Reddit (r/MaleYandere) and I was so so so excited to play this!! Already it's something unique and there are so many features about this game that make it beyond intriguing before even playing. Like the fact we control how much of a red flag he is? I love that for a yandere, so obsessed he even listens to what MC says lol
BUT THEN I PLAYED. OH MY GOD. First of all, I love that we spend so much time learning Jayce's psyche. We understand his character completely, why he loves MC, his motivations, everything. And Idk maybe it's the psychology lover in me but that was perfectionnnnn. I want more games to have prologues in the obsessive LI's POV.
I love the fact that when the MC and Jayce finally meet, we as the audience can tell exactly what's going on in baby boy's head lmao I felt so bad for him. I just KNEW he was screaming at himself internally the entire time like, "SAY SOMETHING! ANYTHING! PLEASE!"
(Also the beginning with the counting of the days was so cool!)
Everything is so beautifully written. Like actual novel level quality.
At first, I only played the demo. But it was so good and I did NOT feel ready to say goodbye to this game yet. I really don't even have 5$ to spend and I did anyways lmao But even just by the demo, it's so worth it to support this game.
And now I just feel genuinely sad I played through everything. God I love Jayce lmao I cannot wait to see more of him! Ngl MC is going to take some getting used to for me since her personality seems VERY different from mine lol But either way this is probably my favorite yandere dating sim I've played (and I've played like over 20 I think now). Like genuinely such a masterpiece so far!!
Random question-- if you were going to give a voiceclaim to Jayce, who would it be?
I'm maybe having a moment here but can anyone help me. How can i buy the game? I've never purchased anything on here 🙈❤️
When it asks how much you want to donate, make sure you put 5$! The full game becomes available when you give the minimum for it basically, if that makes sense
oh thank u so much! That helps alot. 💓
Played the demo and instantly bought the game (what's here so far, I know it's not complete yet) because daaaaamn that was so good. The way the story unfolds is amazing and I'm really looking forward to more! I really enjoy your writing style; you are very talented. Keep up the good work!
Women need more great fiction like this xD
Holy shit this game is nuts hahaha he's crazy. I've been following the development on reddit a little and I clicked so fast when I found out that this came out. Can't wait to see him get worse!
Finally good hardcore for women!
FR WE’VE BEEN STARVING FOR IT!!!!
You can say that again!!!
OMW IM IN LOVE WHAT
AHHH THANK YOUUUU!!!
The BOI's POV was amaaazing! Got me entagled in the story real quick, I was feeling like I'm loosing my mind as well~ I've got a few questions if you don't mind me asking:
1)I wanted to ask you, what's the difference between demo and paid verison? Is that a complete game? Will you sell it only on itch or steam maybe?
2) Will be be able to influece MC's personality somehow or she is set in stone? Will there be options to choose if she's experienced or not like in 14DWY (if you know that novel)? It doesen't change the fact that I love your game reagrdless and I understand thatthis is your personal project and I'll buy it anyway but still curious~ SOrry for my rumbling
I paid for the full version and yeah, definetly get it lmao. It's not the full game yet, it's just Arc 1, Part 1, which is essentially the demo + WAYYYY more stuff (nsfw is more included too). I literally JUST finished playing the game lmao.
It ends with Jayce finding out about Blake and then, obv, we need to wait for the update (check out the "meet his enemies" to know more about the arcs). The arcs aren't out yet, but they will be soon hopefully!
And to answer your #2, I think there will be ways for MC's personality to be influenced by YOUR decisions. Like... in the demo (and full game), we can make decisions that influence our personality (like when we can choose to say its exciting or intimidating, etc). I'm not the creator though so I'm just spitballing lolll.
I hope you get the full game though; super fun!!
Okay yes! Thank you!! You actually got all of that right, I think! And thank you so so much!
Hopefully, I’ll be able to get these out to you all quickly!
For question 2, as of right now, unfortunately it’s hard to change the mcs personality, but with time, I’m working on making it so that you can (in the next parts!) Such as maybe more shy or more feisty!
To answer the question about experience, I can definitely try that! I know some people want virgin x virgin and I can def incorporate that! :3c
Thank you both again so much!
You're welcome, I wasn't trying to make definitive statements bc I have no idea where you're going to take it, but I wanted to reply to someone and help with the knowledge I had!
Can't wait for the updates and whatnot; you're doing great and I really love the game! <3
Oh, of course! And I appreciate it so very very much! You explained it better than I could, I think! Thank you again :D You’re awesome! ❤️
Thank you for making such a gem :>
i played this last night in pitch black darkness and let me just say, the horror is real T^T okay maybe i'm a soft girlie, BUT I WAS GETTING SCARED DURING THE OPENING ARC LMFAO. the art is soooo good. he's so unsettling, it's fantastic. but also...do what you gotta do, hero :p it's only fair. the saucy scenes? gnawing the bars of the enclosure he has placed me in. i really like the mc's pov, as well. this is so fun. was scaraoused. looking forward to the rest of your game :D
That’s okay! Soft girlies are perfect just the way they are (I’m also a very shy soft girlie! :3c) IM SO GLAD IT SCAROUSED YOU!!!
New game, different format from what I've seen before, refreshing, I quite liked it. Excited to see what's next.
will this also be released on steam?
JESUSU CHRIST
I’m hoping that reply means you are satisfied? 🙏🫣
YYEYSYYS VERI PRETTI AND BEAUTIFUL AND I HAD THE PAGE OPEN THE ENTIRE NIGHT, I WILL B PLAYINNGNGN TODAY :3
holy MOLY im in love... I CANT WAIT FOR THE FULL GAME.
I am super excited for this game, its intense and interesting - I need more! 💕
(very yappy comment incoming) i enjoyed this sooooo much that i literally binged it and told my friend about it :3 the colors and general artwork are incredible and the contrast between mc and Jayce's inner dialogue is actually perfect (i love the different music choice to really drive home Jayce's crazy inner world, as well as the different palettes used for each of their perspective's). i really liked Jayce's battle with his guilt and "cheating" and loooove his character arc of building himself into a stronger, unrecognizable man. also the scene with Mac had me like 🥴🥴 in the BEST way LOL
my fav aspects are 1) the insecurity and confusion from the MC who doesn't believe a man like Jayce would ever pursue her (real af???) and 2) the emphasis on Jayce loving mc regardless of how she looks ;;; i love fanfiction, romance novels and otome games but the biggest struggle for me is feeling like even with the "perfect guy," i still wouldn't be his type or taste... you completely erased that feeling for me by making the mc's character model neutral and also having Jayce reiterate how obsessed he is despite any flaws. (edit: and i forgot to add this bit earlier but i really really like how mc is a normal, average girl and not some powerhouse with an ace always up her sleeve. i love that archetype too but your vision of mc is really refreshing.)
i could keep going but i'll be normal... i will be following this closely and genuinely cannot wait for the next update. thank you for your hard work ❤️🔥
LOVE this so damn much, and seeing what you're planning for the story on patreon!! Thanks for sharing this with us, so excited to see more!!! Frothing at the mouth for more Jayce fr
I just went through all the content and Jayce is a delight. He's so unintentionally funny at times, and let me say, I love that he's still a virgin (virgin ML for the win!).
His POV is the best part of the game, hands down, and I like it a LOT better than when we're in the MC's head. I like how unhinged he can be and his reunion with the MC was great! Right now he's the perfect mix between dangerous and a puppy in love. I was a bit more ambivalent about the Act 1 - Part 2.
The only thing I wish for, is that we'd influence the MC's personality a bit more through choices, I'm not clicking with her. But I understand that this is a passion project and you're the only person working on it. The MC isn't why we're here anyway, and Jayce as the product is great!!
I'll looking forward to the full game. It feels so special to see a VN for women with 3D models, I hope your game thrives and becomes a classic for yandere enjoyers!
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Edit: I wanted to gush more now that I've realized the rest of my comment gets hidden under a cut, so I can talk about some spoilers.
I really like how you established the source of Jayce's obsession. The intro was genuinely unnerving and as the reader, you feel scared, sad and then moved by him. One can understand how he ended up latching onto the MC. Him deciding to become a better version of himself felt strangely close to me, I got into working out because I wanted to be pretty for my husbandos when I was in highschool, lol.
And the scene where he got his vengeance against Mac, UFFF, I got chills!! Him pissing on that man was a hilarious choice, and tied everything up with a bow. My fav line there was Jayce saying he felt levelheaded, haha!
Other thing, I like how he's focused on marrying the MC. Like, yes, wife her up. He doesn't want to be a boyfriend, he's coming for the husband tittle.
And I love how his geeky personality peeks through.
Thanks so much for your review AHHHHH!!!! If I could have the entire game be Jayce’s POV, I would, but it would be really hard to do without expressing the MCS feelings etc! ):
Originally when I first started, the mc was going to be more like me, very shy and introverted, soft spoken and meek, but I realized in order to progress the story, there has to be tension, even having the mc do things I wouldn’t, like refusing Jayce! (I mean honestly, I’d be clawing at Jayce’s feet the moment he looks at me, like YES TAKE ME HOME I WILL NOT FIGHT YOU) But if that happened…there’d be no story.
This is why in every single part we will get a lengthy portion in Jayce’s POV! I know that’s what the people want! His view is ALWAYS fun and exciting! But I’ll try to add more options on switching up the mc in future parts! ❤️ I’ll try to add more shy options and choices, or possibly even MORE bold so that she can hopefully suit most people (Though I know I can’t please everyone!)
And I’m so glad you loved the game! And Jayceeee ahhhhh! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!
Yeah, I get what you mean, there has to be tension, and you have a vision for your game! Still, I'm super happy that you're thinking about giving us more choices, I'd like to have options to make her more shy. Or even dialogue options that don't go anywhere and say the same thing but in a different way, they're just there for flavor. Also, I hope that her sexual experience can be up to us as well, I want them to be Virgin x Virgin, that would be so cute!!!
Of course, that's all up to you as the creator, and I'll be happy to write a lengthy review for each update anyway!
Ooh I agree! I also enjoy the "just for flavor" choices. I know some players feel they don’t matter since they lead to the same outcome, but I find they make the experience so much more immersive. Especially with the MC being a gray base model with no defined features, it really feels like we're meant to self-insert or imagine our own OC. I’d also love if the MC sexual experience could be left open for us to decide too.
I AGREE WITH VIRGIN X VIRGIN!!
Loved it ! Got so immersed in the story I played it all in one go.
10s all across the board, can't wait for the full game !!! <3 can tell a lot of hard work was put into it, especially considering that it's all done by you ! seriously, congratulations on such a captivating/well done game !